tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post2010738994273454238..comments2023-09-29T05:29:10.040-07:00Comments on Jayashree Writes: MazesJayashree Srivatsanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comBlogger84125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-91910077763204642332012-09-19T13:06:14.065-07:002012-09-19T13:06:14.065-07:00Me being a doctor and a self-confessed writer coul...Me being a doctor and a self-confessed writer could not have come up with such an elaborate and emotional account of the ICU.<br />well done.<br />ratikaasteria's canvasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02408565009305995259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-39023762492416610372012-09-12T02:11:27.858-07:002012-09-12T02:11:27.858-07:00:) Thanks Divya. :) Thanks Divya. Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-67044089432654764182012-09-12T01:21:15.572-07:002012-09-12T01:21:15.572-07:00Gripping as always, Jaish. I have one more story t...Gripping as always, Jaish. I have one more story to catch up with. Shall come by tomorrow. I'll get into trouble if I don't hit bed now ;).D.Nambiarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14567504529129900396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-51240620902378995612012-09-09T07:37:58.240-07:002012-09-09T07:37:58.240-07:00:) Thank you!:) Thank you!Manasahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13070168828300968077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-42417056423034290762012-09-09T06:41:16.812-07:002012-09-09T06:41:16.812-07:00Thanks a lot Ash :) Thanks a lot Ash :) Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-83854904279980888262012-09-09T06:16:40.663-07:002012-09-09T06:16:40.663-07:00Gripping narration and touchy ending. Loved readin...Gripping narration and touchy ending. Loved reading this :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536345883786351390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-83850356968179171512012-09-09T03:49:59.096-07:002012-09-09T03:49:59.096-07:00Thank you Richi :)Thank you Richi :)Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-52152194067104829992012-09-09T02:11:12.168-07:002012-09-09T02:11:12.168-07:00That is a touching story to say the least. That is a touching story to say the least. Richi Baidwanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16838837250585490151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-23931443173279824372012-09-09T01:53:25.098-07:002012-09-09T01:53:25.098-07:00Thanks Manasa :) your poem was terrific :) Thanks Manasa :) your poem was terrific :) Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-84401811818371944272012-09-09T01:51:42.374-07:002012-09-09T01:51:42.374-07:00Thanks a lot for reading and for the comment Bhagy...Thanks a lot for reading and for the comment Bhagyashree . And thanks a ton to FiF too :) Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-13551594475891972492012-09-08T23:25:42.374-07:002012-09-08T23:25:42.374-07:00All the best Jaish ! Good One!All the best Jaish ! Good One!Manasahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13070168828300968077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-5299052923766191612012-09-08T22:00:42.049-07:002012-09-08T22:00:42.049-07:00Found in folsom told me abt this post. Good of her...Found in folsom told me abt this post. Good of her or else I would have missed such a wonderful post. Enjoyed it :)Very well wovenBhagyashreehttp://www.bbsearchingself.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-38934057801154463792012-09-08T20:27:40.992-07:002012-09-08T20:27:40.992-07:00Thanks a lot ashzzes :)Thanks a lot ashzzes :)Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-70009573425360098732012-09-08T20:07:43.251-07:002012-09-08T20:07:43.251-07:00wow, now this is a heart stealer! indeed touching ...wow, now this is a heart stealer! indeed touching :)<br /><br />best wishes Aishwaryahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04787807761435107431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-72051486305277671712012-09-08T07:00:31.396-07:002012-09-08T07:00:31.396-07:00That's good attitude! :)That's good attitude! :)Kshitij KK Khuranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188895602887528293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-61509623276248688232012-09-07T17:12:14.658-07:002012-09-07T17:12:14.658-07:00Thanks FiF . So the good thing about the confusion...Thanks FiF . So the good thing about the confusion is that everyone read it twice :) ha ha . Thanks for the comment dear Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-13948359379999988582012-09-07T17:09:54.934-07:002012-09-07T17:09:54.934-07:00Thanks Crd . Thanks Crd . Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-89284030284556618392012-09-07T15:43:18.817-07:002012-09-07T15:43:18.817-07:00Jaish, didn't understand anything at the end. ...Jaish, didn't understand anything at the end. After seeing a couple of comments, I went back and scanned for a 2nd read and then it was clear...dumbo me...:) you write stories well.Found In Folsomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11381456888085332705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-76889333131346757102012-09-07T09:16:10.371-07:002012-09-07T09:16:10.371-07:00Was confused initially. Had to go back to start to...Was confused initially. Had to go back to start to get it. Nice plot :) ATB for BAT 31CRDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14040468252329133910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-76940115013689800552012-09-06T23:15:42.169-07:002012-09-06T23:15:42.169-07:00Hi Kshitij
You have left such lovely encouraging ...Hi Kshitij<br /><br />You have left such lovely encouraging comments....How would I take it as 'cluttering' the comments section?<br /><br />Thank you Thank you Thank you :D So many of them coz thats how elated I feel after reading your re-assuring words :)<br /><br />As I mentioned earlier on seeing the mixed reaction in the comments, I was not sure if the writing style was flawed or whether it required a little more patient reading.<br /><br />Having said that every person writing will definitely have a lot of areas to improve and I am taking all those comments as stepping stones for my betterment. :D <br />I am so glad that you found this post worthy of such detailed comments! Thanks again :)Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-15557926311523361712012-09-06T21:15:32.138-07:002012-09-06T21:15:32.138-07:00And now that I went back and read again, I think t...And now that I went back and read again, I think there is no flaw. No confusion. it's all clear from my end :) Haha. but a great post Jaish. Sorry for cluttering the comments section.Kshitij KK Khuranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188895602887528293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-92124942062881112702012-09-06T21:12:27.023-07:002012-09-06T21:12:27.023-07:00Having read some of the comments, I am a bit confu...Having read some of the comments, I am a bit confused about the 'flaw' people are talking about. I thought it flowed well. Kshitij KK Khuranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188895602887528293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-23386440392594368832012-09-06T21:10:00.665-07:002012-09-06T21:10:00.665-07:00One of the best posts I have read this BAT. The ch...One of the best posts I have read this BAT. The character you built out of Sandhya is very nice, caring, and strong.<br /><br />The part about saying a prayer for others... which in turn brings herself into some sort of consciousness is very beautiful. Oh! I think I loved your post.Kshitij KK Khuranahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188895602887528293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-7249407623623469972012-09-06T16:16:21.188-07:002012-09-06T16:16:21.188-07:00Same here Odyzz :) thanks for visiting and for the...Same here Odyzz :) thanks for visiting and for the comment :) Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7222346584322197076.post-34067508105221740532012-09-06T11:15:07.858-07:002012-09-06T11:15:07.858-07:00Very different plot and beautifully penned down st...Very different plot and beautifully penned down story..<br /><br /><br />Heartfelt thanks for visiting my space and adding colors of encouragement with your words...keep adding them more n more... :)odyzzhttp://odizzey.wordpress.com/2012/09/02/strangers-in-the-night-blog-a-ton/noreply@blogger.com